Question

13．假如你是李梅．你的美國(guó)筆友 Tom 在昨天的E-mail中告訴你，最近他對(duì)中國(guó)文化產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，希望你能給他介紹一些經(jīng)典故事．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給圖畫，給Tom回復(fù)一封E-mail，向他講述這一經(jīng)典故事，并希望知道他對(duì)該故事及主人公的看法．
Sima Guang hit the tank（缸）

要 求：
1．文章需包括所有圖畫的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息；
3.100 詞左右（郵件的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是給Tom回復(fù)一封E-mail，向他講述司馬光砸缸的故事，并希望知道他對(duì)該故事及主人公的看法．注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1描述圖畫：司馬光和朋友一起玩捉迷藏，旁邊有一口裝滿水的缸，一個(gè)小孩掉進(jìn)缸里，其他小孩嚇壞了，司馬光想出主意，撿起石頭扔向缸，缸破了，小孩得救了．
2詢問(wèn)對(duì)該故事及主人公的看法．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣
fall into 掉入
be full of 充滿
pick up 撿起
【高分句型】
1．I'm very happy①that you②are interested in traditional Chinese stories．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣

2①．When the kids were playing，one child accidentally ②fell into the tank．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②fall into 掉入
3．Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．
so…that…如此…以致于…，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories．【高分句型】Well，let me tell you a famous one with the name"Sima Guang hit the tank"．
Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with several children in the backyard．There was a large water tank in the yard．It was full of water．（第一幅圖）When the kids were playing，one child accidentally fell into the tank．【高分句型】Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．【高分句型】（第二幅圖）However，Sima Guang was different．He thought it over and then had an idea．He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank．（第三幅圖）"Bang!"，the tank broke and the water ran out．The kid was saved．（第四幅圖）
Do you like the story？What do you think of Sima Guang？（詢問(wèn)對(duì)該故事及主人公的看法．）
I am looking forward to hearing from you．
Li Mei

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文的基本步驟：
一、列出要點(diǎn)．明確寫作的具體內(nèi)容，仔細(xì)尋找全部要點(diǎn)，做到要點(diǎn)無(wú)遺漏．
二、依據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，選擇確立可供自己使用的熟悉詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型．做到"不求難，不求異，只求準(zhǔn)"．
三、將要點(diǎn)譯成基本句子．盡量用熟悉、簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)，避免因用大量的長(zhǎng)句和復(fù)合句而造成的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．忌用漢語(yǔ)思維生造句子．
四、按一定的時(shí)間、空間及邏輯順序或情節(jié)發(fā)展對(duì)基本句子進(jìn)行有序的排列組合．
五、適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接過(guò)渡詞將句子連接成文．
六、細(xì)心檢查錯(cuò)漏：檢查人稱和主謂是否一致；檢查時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)是否正確，檢查語(yǔ)句和措詞是否恰當(dāng)；檢查拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否無(wú)誤；檢查內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否齊全．