Question

8．Describe your favorite teacher in no more than 120words according to the following points．His or her looks （hair\height\build）   
His or her likes or dislikes   
His or her personal character   
His or her way of teaching （at least one example）
（點題）My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun．（外貌）He has short hair．He's of medium build．（喜好）He likes reading all kinds of books，writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day．He dislikes smoking，drinking wine and talking idly．（性格）He's outgoing and energetic．He can make a speech for four hours．
（教學(xué)方法）He's very patient and is never angry with his students．He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulites in learning．He said，"I'm happy to have such students．It's these students that give me chance to show my ability to educate them．"I'm not good at learning at the beginning．By and by，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me．．

Answer 1

分析 此題是介紹人物的命題作文．1．審題立意：記敘文、描寫人物、用第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時．2、構(gòu)思列綱：點名主題"最喜歡的老師"；根據(jù)題意內(nèi)容對英語老師進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的描寫；這是一篇給材料作文，本文所給要點是幾個問題，1．His or her looks （hair\height\build）.2．His or her likes or dislikes 3．His or her personal character 4．His or her way of teaching 故動筆前先要閱讀要點，找出問題的答案．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將問題所涉及內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．重點詞匯和句型：favorite，be of medium…，like doing sth，be angry with，make progress等

解答 （點題）My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun．（外貌）He has short hair．He's of medium build．（喜好）He likes reading all kinds of books，writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day．He dislikes smoking，drinking wine and talking idly．（性格）He's outgoing and energetic．He can make a speech for four hours．
（教學(xué)方法）He's very patient and is never angry with his students．He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulites in learning．He said，"I'm happy to have such students．It's these students that give me chance to show my ability to educate them．"I'm not good at learning at the beginning．By and by，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me．

點評 本題是考查書面表達(dá)能力，在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中要加強(qiáng)寫的訓(xùn)練，達(dá)到熟練運(yùn)用的目的，書寫工整，語法準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然連貫．