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4．假設(shè)你是某學(xué)生雜志社的編輯Diana，收到了讀者Steve的一封來(lái)信，信中傾訴了他目前的煩惱．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Steve寫一封回信．
提示：

與人交流	課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；課間和同學(xué)交談
表達(dá)善意	主動(dòng)問(wèn)候同學(xué)；對(duì)同學(xué)友好；幫助同學(xué)
參加活動(dòng)	積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)（如：運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、歌詠比賽等）

參考詞匯：小組討論 group work表達(dá) express
要求：1．詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)．
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Dear Diana，
I just came to a new school．And I can't get on well with my new classmates…What should I do？
Steve
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Dear Steve，
I've learned about your problems．I thinkyou should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．I'm sure you will soon be popular among friends．
Best wishes，
Diana．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇表格類提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫一封回信，給朋友提怎樣和同學(xué)相處好的建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1與人交流：課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；課間和同學(xué)交談
2表達(dá)善意：主動(dòng)問(wèn)候同學(xué)；對(duì)同學(xué)友好；幫助同學(xué)
3．參加活動(dòng)：積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)（如：運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、歌詠比賽等）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be active in 積極參與
try to do sth盡力做某事
get on with sb與…相處
forget to do sth忘記去做某事
take part in參加
such as例如
高分句型：
1．I think①you should be active in group work in class and be ②brave enough to express your ideas．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為think的賓語(yǔ)，that省略．
②adj/adv+enough+to do sth足夠怎么樣去做某事
brave enough to express your ideas足夠勇敢去表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．（enough修飾形容詞）
He didn't run fast enough to catch the train．他跑得不夠快，沒趕上火車（他跑得不夠快以至于沒趕上火車）．（enough修飾副詞 fast）
2．①If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello ②when you meet them．
①if引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，意為當(dāng)…的時(shí)候．

解答 Dear Steve，
I've learned about your problems．I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．（高分句型）Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them（高分句型）（與人交流）Being friendly and helpful is also very important．（表達(dá)善意）You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．（參加活動(dòng)）I'm sure you ll soon be popular among friends．
Best wishes，
Diana

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細(xì)的表格類作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系