Question

6．2016年10月，萬(wàn)圣節(jié)期間，成都地鐵拒絕一群化妝成鬼怪模樣的年輕人進(jìn)入，擔(dān)心嚇到乘客．由此引發(fā)了網(wǎng)上關(guān)于中國(guó)人是否應(yīng)該過(guò)洋節(jié)（foreign festival）的討論．大家各抒己見(jiàn)．請(qǐng)問(wèn)你對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題有什么看法，請(qǐng)寫一篇短文，講述一下你的觀點(diǎn)．
提示：支持者：過(guò)洋節(jié)能夠了解西方文化（western culture），開(kāi)闊眼界，交流看法（exchange ideas）．反對(duì)者：要保護(hù)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化（traditional culture），牢記歷史，不能崇洋媚外（be crazy about foreign things）．要求：1．表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，內(nèi)容連貫；
 2．根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festival or not．昨天，我們就是否該慶祝洋節(jié)展開(kāi)了討論．
have a discussion討論；whether…or not是否
【高分句型二】
As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has in fact become a global village．我們都知道，隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展，地球已經(jīng)變成一個(gè)地球村．
with介詞短語(yǔ)，意思是"隨著…"，表示伴隨狀態(tài)；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的應(yīng)用，have/has+過(guò)去分詞

解答 Nowadays，there appears a Phenomenon that many Chinese become crazy about foreign festivals．（引出話題）Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festival or not．【高分句型一】Opinions are divided on this issue．Sixty percent of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．Besides，people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals．（反對(duì)方的觀點(diǎn)）However，thirty percent of the students argue that it's natural trend to celebrate foreign festivals． As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has in fact become a global village．【高分句型二】Those festivals that were once foreign to us are now familiar to us．（支持方的觀點(diǎn)）
Both of them have their own ideas．I think if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones，it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

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