Question

假設(shè)你是王明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給在英國(guó)的姑姑寫(xiě)一封信，告訴她你過(guò)去三年的學(xué)習(xí)情況以及到新學(xué)校的打算。

過(guò)去三年的學(xué)習(xí)情況	1.努力學(xué)習(xí)，擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，并在英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。 2.幫助老師組織英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)。
到新學(xué)校的打算	……

 
要求：1.請(qǐng)不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名，校名和地名；
2.提示信息要全部用上，到新學(xué)校的打算不少于三點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
4.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear aunt,
How’s it going? I’d like to tell you about my school life._____________________________
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Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Wang Ming

Answer 1

Dear aunt,
How’ s it going? I’d like to tell you about my school life. In the past three years, I’ve been studying hard at all subjects and I do best in English. I got several prizes in English competitions. And  helped our English teacher organize some English activities. This September I will become a high school student. I will work harder and I will help my classmates as much as possible. I think I can get on well with everyone. I will take part in different kinds of activities and do more exercise to keep healthy. I am sure I will make greater progress in high school.

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。