分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是以Learn to Smile為題談?wù)剬W(xué)會微笑的意義.時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱主要為第三人稱和第二人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點:
1.學(xué)會對自己微笑.
2.學(xué)會對他人微笑.
3.學(xué)會對生活微笑.
常用到的重點短語:
smile at sb 對某人微笑
keep healthy 保持健康
make sb/sth+adj 讓…怎么樣
belong to 屬于
between …and…兩者之間
【高分句型】
1.Sometimes the one ①who beats you is not others,②but yourself.
①who是關(guān)系代詞,定語從句修飾先行詞the one.who作為從句的主語.
②but表示而是,與前面的not,構(gòu)成not…but …不是…而是…
2.①In a word,smile is a kind of language②belonging to everyone.
①in a word 總之
②動名詞短語做后置定語,修飾前面的名詞language.
解答 Learn to Smile
Do you like smiling?Smile is common in our lives,but it is also very important to us because it has magic power.I think we should learn to smile.
First,learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life.If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends,don't be sad.Just smile at yourself.Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence.Sometimes the one who beats you is not others,but yourself.【高分句型】And smile can also keep you healthy.(學(xué)會對自己微笑)
Second,learn to smile at others.It will make you communicate better with people.Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.(學(xué)會對自己微笑)
Third,Smiling at life is a style to live,is important to our development,makes us confident and be a happier life.(學(xué)會對生活微笑)
In a word,smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone.【高分句型】It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Living with a smile,every day will be shiny.
點評 提綱作文注意:
1.仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點.
2.提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,
按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.
3.根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣.
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