Question

6．作為一名中學(xué)生，要理解父母的辛苦勞作，要力所能及地幫助父母干一些家務(wù)活，以減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示以"Help My Parents"為標(biāo)題寫一篇文章，提示包括：
1、我有一個(gè)幸福的家庭，爸爸媽媽工作很辛苦，所以我經(jīng)常幫助父母干家務(wù)．
2、早晨起床后整理床鋪、打掃房間、掃地．
3、早餐后刷碗，然后去上學(xué)．
4、下午放學(xué)回家后幫助媽媽做晚飯、打掃客廳、倒垃圾，之后完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)．
5、周末洗衣服、疊衣服、幫助爸爸洗車、澆花．
6、參考詞匯：help my parents，do chores，make the bed，sweep the floor，do the dishes，take out the trash，fold the clothes，clean the car，water the flowers
Help My Parents                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 In the afternoon，when I get back home from school，I usually help my mom cook dinner．     下午，放學(xué)回家后，我經(jīng)常幫媽媽做飯．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
 My parents often say I am hard-working．  我父母常說(shuō)我很勤勞．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，My parents often say 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Help My Parents
    I have a happy family．My parents work very hard．They want to make more money for our family．As a student，I should study hard and help my parents．So I often do many chores to help my mom and dad．【開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明主題】
    In the morning，I make the bed after I get up every day．Next I clean the room and sweep the floor．After breakfast I help my mom do the dishes．Then I go to school．In the afternoon，when I get back home from school，I usually help my mom cook dinner【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．After dinner，I clean the living room and take out the trash．Then I do homework and watch TV．On weekends，I often do the laundry and fold the clothes for my family．Sometimes I help my father clean the car and water the flowers．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹自己怎么幫助父母做家務(wù)】
    My parents often say I am hard-working【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．I am glad to hear．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

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