Question

如今你已經(jīng)是初三的學(xué)生了，但你發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)之間的溝通少了。于是你在班里的板報(bào)上呼吁同學(xué)間應(yīng)加強(qiáng)溝通，請(qǐng)以溝通的重要性為題寫(xiě)一篇約80字的文章，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 溝通是必要的，也是重要的；

2. 溝通有很多種方式，如：語(yǔ)言，眼神交流，肢體語(yǔ)言，手勢(shì)等；

3. 溝通帶來(lái)的多種好處：可以幫助同學(xué)增進(jìn)友誼，可以共同解決學(xué)習(xí)上的難題，可以減少大家的誤解(misunderstanding)……

Communication is Important

We are the students in Grade Three now. but I find we are lack of communication these days.I think it is not good for our studies. Because ……

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Communication is Important

We are the students in Grade Three now. but I find we are lack of communication these days. I think it is not good for our studies. Because communication is very necessary as well as important/ Communication is very necessary, and it is very important, too. And there are many ways of communication, such as words, making eye contact, body language, hand gestures, and so on.. Also, communication is very useful among us. It can make our friendships stronger and stronger. We can do with our difficulties with communication. Communication can be reduced our misunderstanding each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求以溝通的重要性為題寫(xiě)一篇80字的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂語(yǔ)之間數(shù)的問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫(xiě)出滿(mǎn)意的文章來(lái)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章多處使用具有連接意義的詞如because、as well as、and、also等等，使文章語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。