Question

1．三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，你將展開全新的人生旅程．給親愛的自己寫點(diǎn)什么吧，回憶一下剛剛踏人初中校門的你，三年中不斷變化成長的你，描繪一下今后不斷努力奮斗的你．要求：80詞左右，文中不出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)信息．題目：To the dearest self．
To the dearest self
                                              

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure回首過去，我經(jīng)歷了成功的喜悅或失敗的痛苦．這是一個現(xiàn)在完成時引導(dǎo)的句子，go through經(jīng)歷，the joy of…的快樂，喜悅，the pains of…的痛苦．
高分句型二：Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study老師對我們很友好，對我們學(xué)習(xí)總是很嚴(yán)格．本句使用兩個固定短語：be friendly to sb．對某人友好；be strict with sb．對某人要求嚴(yán)格．

解答 To the dearest self
        How time flies!Three years passed in a blink．（總體說明三年初中的時間之快）Lots of memories left in my head．Teachers，classmates，hard work and above all friendship stay in mind．Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure（高分句型一：回首過去）．Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study（高分句型二：介紹初中三年老師的教導(dǎo)）．Classmates and friends help me so much．With their help I've made great  progress．But I'm a careless boy．And I always make mistakes which can be avoided．Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings．As it is said，"It is not our abilities that show what we truly are，it is our choice．"The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future．And I believe I can do it．（展望高中生活及自己的決心）

點(diǎn)評 在寫作時，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．