Question

19．根據(jù)要求完成大作文．
為了迎接中考，同學(xué)們都在進(jìn)行緊張的復(fù)習(xí)，部分學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)明顯下降．這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視．
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語寫一篇微博，建議大家在重視學(xué)習(xí)的同時(shí)，要適當(dāng)進(jìn)行體育鍛煉．
要點(diǎn)：（1）鍛煉身體的好處：strong，healthy，energetic…
（2）鍛煉身體的方式：ball games，running，swimming…
（3）請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法或建議．（至少寫兩點(diǎn)）
要求：1 語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
2 60-80詞．
Health is very important to us teenagers．Either study or work is based on strong body．Doing sportsevery day helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!"
There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．
Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us lesshomework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．I also hope our school can organize moresports activities for us．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫一篇微博，建議大家在重視學(xué)習(xí)的同時(shí)，要適當(dāng)進(jìn)行體育鍛煉．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）鍛煉身體的好處：
（2）鍛煉身體的方式：
（3）請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法或建議（至少寫兩點(diǎn)）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
either…or…要么…要么…
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
keep heathy 保持健康
such as 例如
take part in參加
【高分句型】
1．①There are many kinds of sports ②we can do，③such as running，swimming and ball games．
①there be 有，謂語動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)遵循就近原則．
②we can do 是定語從句，修飾先行詞sports，關(guān)系詞which做賓語故省略．
③such as 例如
2．I hope ①teachers will leave us less homework ②so that we can have more time ③to take part in sports．
①省略了that的賓語從句，作為hope的賓語．
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
③動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 Health is very important to us teenagers．Either study or work is based on strong body．Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!"（鍛煉身體的好處）
     There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．【高分句型】（鍛煉身體的方式）
     Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．【高分句型】I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us．（對(duì)開展體育鍛煉的看法或建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．