周華遠(yuǎn)在汶川地震災(zāi)區(qū)的筆友王強(qiáng)失去父母、同學(xué)后很傷心,請(qǐng)你以周華的名義寫一封信給他,鼓勵(lì)他振作起來。

要求:1.必須用上所有提示詞,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.詞數(shù)要求:6080。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞:

提示詞:lose one's life, be brave, talk with, get help from, sleep well, take exercise, relax yourself, smile at life Dear Wang Qiang,

I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in Wenchuan________

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解析:

Dear Wang Qiang,

  I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in WenchuanWhen I knew that your parents and some of your classmates lost their lives, I felt very sadI think you should be braveYou can talk with your friends or teachersMaybe you can get help from themIt's also important for you to sleep wellYou'd better take exercise every dayYou should learn how to relax yourselfTake good care of yourself and smile at life!

Yours, Zhou Hua

  所提供的范文僅供參考。只要能寫出要點(diǎn),行文連貫、語法正確,即達(dá)到寫作要求。從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)與語法結(jié)構(gòu)兩方面,按五個(gè)檔次給分。

  第五檔910分 能寫出全部要點(diǎn),行文連貫,語言基本無誤,完全達(dá)到寫作要求。

  第四檔78分 能寫出全部要點(diǎn),行文基本連貫,語言有少量錯(cuò)誤,基本達(dá)到寫作要求。

  第三檔56分 能寫出大部分要點(diǎn),語言雖有較多錯(cuò)誤,尚能達(dá)意。

  第二檔34分 能寫出基本要點(diǎn),語言錯(cuò)誤多,未達(dá)到寫作要求。

  第一檔02分 只寫出一、二個(gè)句子,語言錯(cuò)誤多。

  0分 未表達(dá)任何與本題內(nèi)容有關(guān)的信息,只字未寫或抄下提示詞。


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     周華遠(yuǎn)在汶川地震災(zāi)區(qū)的筆友王強(qiáng)失去父母、同學(xué)后很傷心,請(qǐng)你以周華的名義寫一封信給他,
鼓勵(lì)他振作起來。
     要求:
     1. 必須用上所有提示詞,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
     2. 詞數(shù)要求:60~80。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
     提示詞:lose one's life, be brave, talk with, get help from, sleep well, 
                   take exercise, relax yourself, smile at life

Dear Wang Qiang,
     I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in Wenchuan. ____________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________

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