Question

14．你有了夢(mèng)想，可這個(gè)夢(mèng)想和你父母的愿望不一致，你將如何與父母溝通？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給你父母寫(xiě)一封信．

要求：1）80詞左右（文中已給出部分不計(jì)入總次數(shù)，不必抄寫(xiě)到答題卡上．）
              2）提示詞必須全部用上，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
              3）注意行文流暢，不必逐句翻譯
參考詞匯：active； smart； do better in； both…and…
Dear Mum and Dad，
Thank you very much for taking care of me for years，I have grown up to be an active and smart boy．I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up，you know my favorite basketball player is Yao Ming．I used to spend too much time on it，so I was weak in my study．You were very angry，I am sorry．from now on，I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball．Believe me and you will be proud of me one day．I am so thankful for your love．
       I'm so thankful for you love．
                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                lovely．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up． 我擅長(zhǎng)打籃球，長(zhǎng)大后我想當(dāng)一名籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball．我會(huì)盡最大努力在學(xué)習(xí)和籃球方面做得更好．try one's best to do sth．盡某人最大的努力做某事，do better in做的更好． both…and…兩個(gè)都…．

解答 Dear mum and dad，
Thank you very much for taking care of me for years，【要點(diǎn)一，向父母表示感謝】I have grown up to be an active and smart boy．I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】，you know my favorite basketball player is Yao Ming【要點(diǎn)二，說(shuō)明自己的夢(mèng)想】．I used to spend too much time on it，so I was weak in my study．You were very angry，I am sorry．from now on，I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball【高分句型二，注意固定詞組的使用】．Believe me and you will be proud of me one day．【要點(diǎn)三，表明決心】I am so thankful for your love．
Yours，
lovely．

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