Question

【題目】假如你是王娟，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，向大家介紹一下你上周末的活動(dòng)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone! I’m Wang Juan. I had a busy but happy weekend. On Saturday morning, I went a bookstore and I bought some books about English and history. In the afternoon, I played volleyball with my friends in the park. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. On Sunday afternoon I went to the movie with my brother. The movie was very interesting.

【解析】

本文是一篇材料作文，這篇作文要求我們以王娟的身份，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹自己上個(gè)周末的活動(dòng)。題目中利用表格的形式，列舉了具體的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)用正確的語(yǔ)言將他們表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在內(nèi)，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，還應(yīng)有適當(dāng)?shù)拈_(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，與評(píng)價(jià)性的句子，這樣可以使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。其次應(yīng)注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，這篇短文介紹的是上周末的活動(dòng)，全文應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)變過(guò)去式，尤其是要注意不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。最后要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，句子之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、條里。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。