Question

上周末，你媽媽生病了，所以你幫媽媽干家務(wù)。請根據(jù)方框的內(nèi)容，詳細(xì)記敘上周末的事情。詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。語句通順，意思連貫。

媽媽的病癥	1.頭痛 2.喉嚨疼 3.咳嗽
醫(yī)生的建議	1.一天吃三次藥 2.… （補(bǔ)充一條）
我的行動	幫媽媽干下列家務(wù)： 1.掃地 2.折疊衣服3. 4.洗碗 5.…（至少補(bǔ)充一條）
感想	……

 

Answer 1

Last weekend, my mother fell ill. She had a headache, had a sore throat and coughed a lot. She went to a doctor. The doctor told my mother to take medicine three times a day. He also advised my mother to drink hot water with honey and have a good rest. Because my mother was sick, I helped mom with housework and chores. I swept the floor, folded my own clothes, did the dishes and took out the rubbish. I satisfaction when I saw the joy on my mother’s face.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文介紹上周發(fā)生的事，故用過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱用第一人稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇段文要點(diǎn)全面，能夠適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時(shí)態(tài)人稱運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，文中用到的短語詞組told my mother to，had a strong feeling of，advised my mother to，hot water with honey使文章更豐富。

考點(diǎn)：表格作文。