Question

時(shí)光荏苒，新學(xué)期的時(shí)光已經(jīng)過去一半了，你的同學(xué)和朋友們都了解你嗎？請(qǐng)寫一篇文章介紹自己。包含自己喜愛的運(yùn)動(dòng)，自己喜愛這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因以及每日三餐的飲食習(xí)慣。
要求:
1.不使用真實(shí)校名,人名等相關(guān)信息.
2.內(nèi)容完整,書寫整齊,詞數(shù)80詞左右.
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                                  
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                   
                                                                                    
                                                                                     
                                                                                   

Answer 1

One possible version:
Hello, I am Alice .I’m thirteen years old. I am in Class 4, Grade 7. My friend Alan is in Class 4, Grade 7.  I like ping-pong very much. My friend Alan likes it too. After class, we like playing it together. For breakfast, I have milk and bread with an apple. I have rice, chicken,tomatoes and eggs sometimes salad for lunch. And I have fish and soup for dinner. It’s healthy to eat well.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，自我介紹應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱用第一人稱。注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，分析英語的正確表達(dá)和句子之間的銜接。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)運(yùn)用正確。還運(yùn)用了like doing ;動(dòng)詞的不定式做主語等等。并注意了句子開頭的變化和的銜接如：and, so等等。