Question

14．（A）話題作文：
2016年8月20日，在里約奧運(yùn)會(huì)上，中國女排頑強(qiáng)拼搏，奮勇爭先，以3：1戰(zhàn)勝塞爾維亞隊(duì)摘得金牌，時(shí)隔十二年，再次實(shí)現(xiàn)了他們的冠軍夢(mèng)．親愛的同學(xué)們，你們的夢(mèng)想是什么？請(qǐng)以 My Dream 為題，談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想．
（B）圖示作文：假設(shè)你是圖中的小女孩，請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下列圖片，展開合理想象，寫一篇日記．

要求：話題作文或圖示作文任選其一．
詞數(shù)在80～100詞之間．
字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Saturday，June 3rd．
                                      

Answer 1

分析 （A）
高分句型：
句型一：
My dream is to be a writer when I grow up．我的夢(mèng)想是長大后當(dāng)一名作家．
不定式做表語；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句；grow up長大．
句型二：
It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them．找到成功人士如何做的，以便于我向他們學(xué)習(xí)，這也是很重要的．
這是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，It is+形容詞 to do sth做某事是…的；how引導(dǎo)賓語從句；so that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句．
（B）  
高分句型：
句型一：
They were so colorful that I couldn't help taking photos of them．它們?nèi)绱宋宀世_紛以至于我忍不住給它們拍照．
so…that…如此…以至于…；couldn't help doing忍不住做某事．
句型二：
I'm looking forward to going there again．我期待再次去那兒．
look forwad to doing sth期待做某事．

解答 （A）
My Dream
 I'm happy to hear that our Chinese Women's Volleyball Team won in the 2016 Olympics．They have realized their dream．（引出下文）Everyone has his or her own dream．（引出下文）My dream is to be a writer when I grow up．（高分句型一）Writing has been （a） part of my life．Through writing，I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others．．（提出自己的夢(mèng)想）I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much as possible．It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them．（實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的方式）（高分句型二）
Where there is a will，there is a way．I will hold on to/stick to my dream till it comes true one day．（總結(jié)全文）
（B）                                                                  
 Saturday，June 3rd
 I had a wonderful school trip today．（引出下文）I went to a farm which was very big．（交代地點(diǎn)）I did many interesting things there．First，I rode a horse．It was my first time to ride a horse．What an exciting experienceNext，I learned to milk a cow and feed chickens．When I was walking through the field，I saw all kinds of flowers．They were so colorful that I couldn't help taking photos of them．（高分句型一）In the field I saw many farmers working．How hard-working they were!I talked with one of them and learnt a lot from him about farming．（具體敘述圖畫內(nèi)容）I had a great time on the farm．I'm looking forward to going there again．（期待下一次來訪）（高分句型二）

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