Question

某調(diào)查組到社會(huì)上進(jìn)行調(diào)查環(huán)境污染的問題，設(shè)計(jì)了下列調(diào)查表.。
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)上面的調(diào)查表說說作為學(xué)生如何做好學(xué)校環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的工作。
注意：短文要求正確、流暢；詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（本小題15分）

Kinds of pollution	There are many kinds of pollution around us such as _air   pollution, _water_      __ pollution, __noise/white__  pollution and rubbish pollution.
results	The environment on the _earth_ is becoming worse and _worse_ .

提示詞：keep…clean and tidy,   clean(v.),   sweep,   throw rubbish into the dustbins,
plant,  so that,  protect,  speak highly of(高度贊揚(yáng)), 
make a contribution to doing(為……貢獻(xiàn))
(不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名。)
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version：
Our school is our second home. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. Everyone can do something useful to improve the environment. First of all, I think it is necessary for us to clean the school yard every day. We must clean the windows and the doors. We also need to sweep the floor. Make sure everyone knows to throw rubbish into the dustbins. Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course, a lot of trees and grass should be planted in our school so that our school looks greener. In a word, if every student makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our school will be much more beautiful.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹作為學(xué)生如何做好學(xué)校環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的工作。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to......；Everyone can do......； I think it is necessary for us to......；We also need to……及 if every student......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意要用題中所提示的單詞和短語。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了保持學(xué)校環(huán)境的重要性，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)該怎樣做，最后說明只要人人去保護(hù)環(huán)境，學(xué)校將變得更加美麗。此處用了keep it clean， First of all, Make sure，throw rubbish into， spoken highly of及makes a contribution to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。