Question

Jim 在英語(yǔ)考試中表現(xiàn)不好，很糟糕，又感到孤獨(dú)，請(qǐng)寫一封信對(duì)他進(jìn)行開導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：

①對(duì)自己有信心；②別沉默，多與人交流；③更加努力學(xué)習(xí)；④參加各種活動(dòng)；⑤笑對(duì)生活等

Dear Jim ,

I’m sorry to hear that

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Kangkang

 

Answer 1

Dear Jim,

I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in the last exam and you feel bad now. What I want to say to you now is that this is nothing. You should be confident of yourself. Don’t be silent and try to talk more to people, Such as your teacher, your classmates and your parents, You many take part in all kinds of activities and it will make you feel relaxed. Besides, go on studying harder and I believe you are sure to make great progress.

Remember that life will smile to you if you smile to life.

Yours,

Kangkang

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求根據(jù)中文提示寫一篇短文，對(duì)在英語(yǔ)考試中表現(xiàn)不好，很糟糕，又感到孤獨(dú)的Jim進(jìn)行開導(dǎo)。在寫作時(shí)一定要做到，語(yǔ)句通順，合乎邏輯，不遺漏一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文多次使用復(fù)合句如What I want to say to you now is that this is nothing. I believe you are sure to make great progress. Remember that life will smile to you if you smile to life.

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