Question

在學(xué)習(xí)生活中，初中學(xué)生具有一些共同的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和不足之處，請(qǐng)根據(jù)自己的觀察和了解，結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充或舉例說(shuō)明，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆幻�合格的中學(xué)生。注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)校名和姓名。2.語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。3.80字左右，開(kāi)頭部分不計(jì)入字總數(shù)。要點(diǎn)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1.Advantages: kind and helpful, energetic, ---
2.Disadvantages: impolite, careless ---
3.Your advice on being a good student (at least two pieces of advice)
Hello, everyone,
Today, I’m going to talk about how to be a good student. As middle school students, we own lots of good qualities. We are usually kind
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Answer 1

       
Hello, everyone,
Today, I’m going to talk about how to be a good student. As middle school students, we own lots of good qualities. We are usually kind and helpful. When people have difficulties and need help ,we are willing to give them a hand. We are energetic as well. We like doing sports and travelling. The most important thing is that most of us work hard in class and play happily after class.
However, we also have some disadvantages. Some of us are a little impolite. Sometimes some disagree on school rules with the teachers, some seldom talk with their parents and even quarrel with them. What’s more, we are so careless that we often make many mistakes in our studies and life.
In my opinion, we have grown up. It’s our duty to be polite and helpful. We should get used to the school life and work hard every day. We must take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve our abilities. It’s very necessary to talk with our parents and teachers when we are stressed. So boys and girls ,try our best to make your future better. That’s all. Thanks for listening.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：we are willing to give them a hand.我們?cè)敢鈳退麄円话眩琖e are energetic as well. 我們也精力充沛，like doing sports and travelling.喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)、旅行，The most important thing最重要的事情，quarrel with them和他們爭(zhēng)吵，What’s more還有，so careless that we often make many mistakes如此粗心以至于經(jīng)常犯錯(cuò)，In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)，It’s our duty to do sth.做……是我們的責(zé)任，take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve our abilities，積極參加各種各樣的活動(dòng)來(lái)提高我們的能力，It’s very necessary to talk with our parents and teachers when we are stressed.當(dāng)我們有壓力時(shí)有必要和父母老師談一談,等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。