Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。（15分）

2012年, 東臺(tái)被評(píng)為 “江蘇文明城市 ”（Jiangsu Civilized City)。 你學(xué)校的English Club 正在舉辦以 “文明東臺(tái)，持續(xù)文明”為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容提示及要求寫(xiě)一篇應(yīng)征稿。

提示：◆尊敬師長(zhǎng)，明禮誠(chéng)信  ◆友善待人，樂(lè)于助人◆遵守交通，不闖紅燈◆保護(hù)環(huán)境，（寫(xiě)2-3個(gè)例子）

要求：1）詞數(shù)90左右，不包含已給出的句子的詞數(shù)。2）內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。

參考詞匯：respect(v.尊敬), polite, honest, obey(遵守), traffic lights, protect the environment, run a red light /to pass a red light /to disobey traffic lights(闖紅燈),spit（吐痰）。

Civilized Dongtai Going on

We are glad that Dongtai is now among the Jiangsu Civilized City. As a student, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                    

In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We are glad that Dongtai is now among the Nanjing civilized City. As a student, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all , we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it’s always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn’t cross the road when the traffic lights are red. Last but not the least, it’s important and necessary to help protect the environment.For example, we shoudln’t spit here and there or throw litter carelessly. We’d better not pick flowers or step on the grass.

In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇以 “文明東臺(tái)，持續(xù)文明”為題的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫(xiě)出滿(mǎn)意的文章來(lái)。