Question

6．"五一"假期即將到來，你計(jì)劃和你的家人一起去北海玩．請你以"My Vacation Plan"為題，根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文，介紹你旅行計(jì)劃．
內(nèi)容提示：
◆天氣：晴朗
◆時(shí)間：兩天
◆打算做的事情：游泳； 吃海鮮；拜訪朋友；…
要求：
1．用上所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文條理清楚、語句連貫；
2．詞數(shù)80左右，短文開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得提及考生自己的真實(shí)姓名．
My Vacation Plan
The May Day vacation is coming．                                         

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I want to visit my friend if there is enough time如果時(shí)間充足我想要去看望朋友．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
I think it will be interesting and we will have a good time我認(rèn)為將會(huì)很有趣，我們會(huì)玩得開心．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

解答 My Vacation Plan
The May Day vacation is coming．I am going to Beihai on vacation with my family．I hope the weather will be fine and suitable for swimming（天氣）．We'll stay there for two days．（時(shí)間）The Beihai sea is very nice，so we plan to swim in the sea and enjoy the sunshine on the beach in the afternoon．At the same time，we'll take some photos．Then we'd like to have some fresh sea food．Also，I want to visit my friend if there is enough time【高分句型一】．（打算做的事情）I think it will be interesting and we will have a good time．【高分句型二】

點(diǎn)評 做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤