Question

假如你是Mary的好朋友，她在生活中遇到了一些問(wèn)題，并寫(xiě)了一封信向你求助，請(qǐng)你給她回一封信，回信因涉及到來(lái)信的每一個(gè)問(wèn)題，詞數(shù)80左右。

Dear Kathy,

   I have some problems and I need your help.

 I was good at English in the past, but now I am in Grade 3 and I find English is getting more and more difficult. Now I am facing a big test. How should I study for the English test?

   Another problem is that now I am not allowed to watch TV. My mother said It was a waste of time, but I don’t think so. I think It’s a good way to have a rest. How can I solve this problem?

   The last one is that I used to be thin, but now I am getting fatter and fatter. I am afraid to see my old friends, and I am very sad.

   I know you always come up with good ideas. Could you help me deal with these problems?

                                                                                             Yours，

                                                                                             Mary

Dear Mary,

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                            Yours，

                                                                            Kathy

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mary，

I have heard from you and knew something about you. You should recite the English carefully and understand the grammer. Then you can practice doing some exercises about it. If you have some problems, you need to ask your teacher about the grammer. Now our study is the most important thing for us and we must study quietly for our future. TV program not only waste our time, but also make us lose the time to study Finally I hope you can have a good live and do excises for your body.

                                                                                 Yours，

                                                                                 Kathy

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。假如你就是Mary的好朋友。要求根據(jù)Mary的來(lái)信，給她寫(xiě)一份回信，幫她解決生活中遇到的問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意回信要涉及來(lái)信的每一個(gè)問(wèn)題，。人稱可以第一人稱，也可以第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。此外，還要注意書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范和字?jǐn)?shù)限定等要求。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】此文包含了來(lái)信提到的各個(gè)問(wèn)題，行文流暢，表達(dá)合理。還使用了一些固定句型及短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如hear from.，practice doing some excises，make us lose the time，take part in，have a good live and do exercises等等。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。