Question

今年，國(guó)內(nèi)外發(fā)生了許多重大事件，馬航失聯(lián)（Malaysia flight disappears）事件尤為牽動(dòng)國(guó)人的心，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示簡(jiǎn)要敘述此次事件的經(jīng)過(guò)。

發(fā)生事件	Flight MH370失蹤
失聯(lián)時(shí)間	2014年3月8日凌晨	失聯(lián)地點(diǎn)	南印度洋(Indian Ocean)
失聯(lián)人員	共239人，大部分是中國(guó)人，其中還包括一名兩歲的嬰兒。	失聯(lián)過(guò)程	在飛行六小時(shí)后突然消失，多國(guó)積極搜尋，至今無(wú)果。
失聯(lián)原因	不明，可能……（考生自擬）

注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
3. 條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫。
The missing of Flight MH370
Many big events happened this year. The missing of Malaysia flight made us especially concerned.
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Answer 1

Flight MH370 just disappered on the early morning of March 8 th, 2014 . The place where Flight MH370 disappered is over Indian Ocean. There were about 239 passengers in the Malaysian airplane (MH370),most of them  are chinese,among them there is a two-year-old baby.
It disappered suddenly after flying for about six hours. Many countries sent planes and ship to help search for the jet.But until now we haven’t known where the flight is.
Where is it now? Why did it disapper? Although there are many ideas about that,none has been proved truly. I guess that the plane was kidnapped by the space aliens， which are called UFO. but it has never been proved,either.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹馬航失聯(lián)事件的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，失聯(lián)過(guò)程，失聯(lián)人員并猜測(cè)失聯(lián)的原因。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的復(fù)合句，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如定語(yǔ)從句The place where Flight MH370 disappered is over Indian Ocean. 賓語(yǔ)從句But until now we haven’t known where the flight is.等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。