Question

請(qǐng)以“The changes in My Hometown”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，要求：1. 詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；2. 條理清晰,語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。

我的家鄉(xiāng)揚(yáng)州位于江蘇中部。它以前空氣新鮮。這些年，隨著城市的發(fā)展，它已經(jīng)變成了一個(gè)現(xiàn)代化的城市和有名的旅游勝地。人們可以坐公交、火車(chē)或飛機(jī)進(jìn)出揚(yáng)州。揚(yáng)州每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自世界各地的游客。許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。然而，污染變得嚴(yán)重了，政府已認(rèn)識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性，采取措施減輕污染。我希望我們過(guò)上更加美好的生活。

The changes in my hometown

Yangzhou , my hometown , is in the centre of Jiangsu .

 

Answer 1

The Changes in My Hometown

My hometown is Yangzhou. It lies in the middle of Jiangsu. However, there has been many changes in my hometown until now. Life has become better . The houses become larger and brighter , and more people get their own cars. Everywhere is decorated with green trees and beautiful flowers and grass. What’s more , thousands of tourists from the world come here every year, which is really splendid. But the air is getting worse and worse. I believe my hometown will become more and more developed and beautiful. Everything in it will represent the advanced science and technology. At the same time ,I will always keep it in mind that my hometown must be greater in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文采用樂(lè)觀者的角度與焦慮者的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行對(duì)比，恰當(dāng)好處運(yùn)用了形容詞的比較級(jí)，從而更清晰的表達(dá)出中心思想。最后作者提出 自己的想法，使文章內(nèi)函得到升華，那就是共同努力創(chuàng)建美好家園。

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