Question

根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇60－80字左右的短文。文章的標(biāo)題開(kāi)頭已給出。
1.旅游是一種非常好的活動(dòng)。當(dāng)你工作累了，有空的時(shí)候，到外地欣賞自然。可呼吸新鮮空氣，可交友，忘記疲勞，有益健康；
2.旅游有時(shí)很麻煩。天氣多變。小偷偷錢(qián)也是常事。
3.旅游時(shí)應(yīng)做充分準(zhǔn)備，需了解天氣情況。有朋友在一起，可相互照顧；小心不要出事故。
Traveling
Traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study,_____

Answer 1

Traveling
Traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study, and when you have free time, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature or other cities. You can breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. It’s good for your health to do so.
But sometimes, traveling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable. There may be rain when you travel. You may catch a cold or be ill while traveling. The worst thing is that the thieves may steal your money. All these may happen to a tourist.
When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, ask a friend to go with you so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try not to cause accidents. If you do this, you will surely enjoy your travel.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹旅游的注意事項(xiàng)。本文做給材料比較詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時(shí)態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達(dá)的多樣化，做到語(yǔ)意連貫符合邏輯。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫(xiě)書(shū)面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問(wèn)題就是人稱(chēng)，不能混淆人稱(chēng)；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的英語(yǔ)，根據(jù)不同的人稱(chēng)確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。