Question

16．醉酒駕車，已經(jīng)成為嚴(yán)重的社會問題，越來越受到人們的關(guān)注，根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />

現(xiàn)象	許多人不遵守交通規(guī)則，仍酒后駕車，對自己和他人的安全不負(fù)責(zé)任
后果	因為酒后駕車，給自己和他人和很多家庭帶來傷害
建議	為了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司機(jī)不要酒后駕車，呼吁更多嚴(yán)格的規(guī)則和制度出臺

提示詞：酒后駕車drunk driving  不負(fù)責(zé)的 irresponsible  交通事故 traffic accident   對…造成傷害   do harm t
                                                               

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勛砭岂{車的現(xiàn)象后果及建議，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1 現(xiàn)象：許多人不遵守交通規(guī)則，仍酒后駕車，對自己和他人的安全不負(fù)責(zé)任
2 后果：因為酒后駕車，給自己和他人和很多家庭帶來傷害
3 建議：為了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司機(jī)不要酒后駕車，呼吁更多嚴(yán)格的規(guī)則和制度出臺
常用到的重點短語：
do harm to 對…有害
in order to  為了…
had better do sth 最好做某事
obey the rules 遵守規(guī)則
ask sb for help 請求某人的幫忙
be supposed to  應(yīng)該

【高分句型】
1．Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year．
were killed 和were injured 是一般過去時的被動語態(tài)was/were+過去分詞
2．If you drink too much，you shouldn't drive by yourself．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞should，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時．

解答 Everyone should obey the traffic rules．Yet there are still many people drunk driving．It's irresponsible（不負(fù)責(zé)任的） not only to the drivers themselves but also the others．
   Many drivers drive very fast in the street，or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk．Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents．（現(xiàn)象）Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year．【高分句型】It has done great harm to quite a few families．（后果）
   In order to keep the public safe，we shouldn't drunk drive．We must obey the traffic rules．If you drink too much，you shouldn't drive by yourself．【高分句型】You'd better take a taxi or ask others for help．The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible（ 建議 ）

點評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．