Question

假設(shè)你是Kate Brown，想尋求筆友。請根據(jù)下面的表格，發(fā)送一封介紹你自己的電子郵件。60詞左右。

Name	Kate Brown
First Name	Kate
Last Name	Brown
Age	14
School	Guanghua Middle School
Phone Number	63626239
From	Canada
Language	English
Members of family	Father ,mother, grandpa, grandma, brother, sister,cousins and their names.

電子郵件的開頭已經(jīng)給出：

Dear friend,

My name is Kate Brown.______ _ ___

_______________________________

_______________________________

_______________________________

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Answer 1

Dear friend, 

    My name is Kate Brown. I'm 14 years old and I'm from Canada. I have a round face, big blue eyes and

long hair. I speak English. I play football after school. It's my favourite sport. I like biology class at school.

It's fun. My favourite film is Danger Zone. Do you know it? The movie is very exciting. Please write to me

soon and tell me about you. 

                                                                                                                                              Yours,

                                                                                                                                               Kate

【解析】

試題分析：本文是書信，給出一定的漢語提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個整體。最后要注意使用高級詞匯與高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因為是書信，故時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時較好，注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換并且注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換

【亮點說明】本文出現(xiàn)一些常見短語如play football 踢足球after school 課下write to 給某人寫信。It's my favourite sport這是很不錯的句子，提到高級詞匯favourite.。 Please write to me soon and tell me about you.這個句子出現(xiàn)兩個并且的祈使句，使文章顯得很利落。

考點：提綱類作文。