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2．生活中總免不了會(huì)出些意外．作為一名中學(xué)生，除了平時(shí)要做有心人，盡量防止意外的發(fā)生，也應(yīng)當(dāng)掌握一些處理意外的知識(shí)．當(dāng)意外突然發(fā)生時(shí)，該如何處理呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />1 了解一些緊急救護(hù)的電話和方法
2 當(dāng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)，及時(shí)拔打緊急救護(hù)電話．
3 清楚告訴對(duì)方發(fā)生的事情和地點(diǎn)
4 保持冷靜，等待救援．
注意：
1詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3參考詞匯：the number of emergency services緊急救護(hù)電話
operator（接線員）
There are always some accidents in our life．so it's very important to know …
what to do when accidents happen．First we need to know the numbers of the emergency services，such as 120，119and 122 and some ways to protect ourselves．When an accident happens，and wecan't deal with it，we should call the numbers of the emergency services for help in time．We shouldtell the operator clearly what happens，where the place is and which service weneed．Then we should keep calm and wait for help．We should try our best tohelp people in trouble when we see an accident．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)劗?dāng)意外突然發(fā)生時(shí)，該如何處理．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1 了解一些緊急救護(hù)的電話和方法
2 當(dāng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)，及時(shí)拔打緊急救護(hù)電話．
3 清楚告訴對(duì)方發(fā)生的事情和地點(diǎn)
4 保持冷靜，等待救援．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
such as例如
deal with 處理
call sb for help打電話找某人幫忙
in time 及時(shí)
wait for等…
keep calm保持冷靜
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．We should tell the operator clearly what happens，where the place is and which service we need．
tell后跟上三個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句what happens，where the place is and which service we need，由and連接，引導(dǎo)詞分別是what，where和which．
2．We should①try our best to help people ②in trouble ③when we see an accident．
①try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
②in trouble處于麻煩中，介詞短語(yǔ)做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾people．
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 There are always some accidents in our life．so it's very important to know what to do when accidents happen．First we need to know the numbers of the emergency services，such as 120，119and 122 and some ways to protect ourselves．（了解一些緊急救護(hù)的電話和方法）When an accident happens，and we can't deal with it，we should call the numbers of the emergency services for help in time．（當(dāng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)，及時(shí)拔打緊急救護(hù)電話）We should tell the operator clearly what happens，where the place is and which service we need【高分句型】（清楚告訴對(duì)方發(fā)生的事情和地點(diǎn)）．Then we should keep calm and wait for help．（保持冷靜，等待救援）We should try our best to help people in trouble when we see an accident．（總結(jié)全文）【高分句型】

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