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6．回想三年的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)歷程，豐富多彩的英語(yǔ)課堂活動(dòng)一定給你留下了許多難忘的印象．請(qǐng)你以"What should we do in English class？"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勗谟⒄Z(yǔ)課堂上學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能使英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)更有效．
提示：（1）Listen to the teacher．
     （2）Take part in activities．
     （3）Be confident in ourselves．
要求：（1）文稿須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
      （2）文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名．
      （3）詞數(shù)：60～80個(gè)．
參考詞匯：take notes，work in groups with…，not be afraid of…
What should we do in English class？
In English class，we shouldlisten to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．Try to answer questions in English．
We should take part in all kinds of activities，like reading，writing，having discussions and playing games．We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other．
It's very important to be confident．Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes．In this way，we can make much progress．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"What should we do in English class？"為題談?wù)勗谟⒄Z(yǔ)課堂上學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能使英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)更有效．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
（1）Listen to the teacher．聽(tīng)老師的．
 （2）Take part in activities．參加活動(dòng)．
（3）Be confident in ourselves．相信自己．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
take notes記筆記
try to do sth 盡力做某事
take part in 參加
learn from sb向某人學(xué)習(xí)
It's+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的 
be afraid of 害怕…
in this way用這種方法
make progress取得進(jìn)步
高分句型：
In English class，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．
when necessary是一個(gè)省略句，完整說(shuō)法是when it is necessary．當(dāng)從句的主語(yǔ)是it謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是be動(dòng)詞時(shí)，從句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞可省略．
It's very important to be confident．
It's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎么樣的．其中it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 What should we do in English class？
In English class，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．（高分句型）Try to answer questions in English．（聽(tīng)老師的）
We should take part in all kinds of activities，like reading，writing，having discussions and playing games．（參加活動(dòng)）We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other．
It's very important to be confident．（高分句型）Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes．（相信自己）In this way，we can make much progress．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此為材料作文，要仔細(xì)審題，抓住重點(diǎn)，將所給信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)，可使用一些表示順序的詞，使論述更明確，更有層次感．還要注意多使用一些委婉的提建議的句型，盡量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥單調(diào)．要求語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法，詞匯，時(shí)態(tài)正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范