Question

你的好朋友Linda， 現(xiàn)在面臨很多壓力，爸爸媽媽總是把她與其他同學(xué)相比較，因此她最近心情很不好。

請你給她寫一封信，建議她1.與父母好好溝通，2.通過做運動，聽音樂等方式學(xué)會放松。

要求：1. 語句通順，符合邏輯，2. 70詞左右。

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Answer 1

Hi! Linda, I am sad when I heard your question ten month ago, I have the some question as your classmates. I am very angry ,too! But I know she wants me to study harder and get better grades. So I communicate with my

mother。And now we are understand them. So you can try to communicate with your mother. Or you can try to listen to some quite music and watch some games to relax yourself. And I hope you become happy later!

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)題目要求可知，本文主要以第一人稱書寫，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，在寫作時可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞，使文章前后連貫，符合邏輯。要注意把每個要點都表達出來，不可遺漏任何一個。

【亮點說明】本文中多次使用連詞如and、or、so為文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。