Question

【題目】假如你是李華,你的筆友Frank 是一名美國(guó)中學(xué)生,打算今年暑假來(lái)南充旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖,用英語(yǔ)寫一封email 給他介紹一下南充。

要求:1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；

2.必須包含思維導(dǎo)圖所給的提示，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名，校名或地名（思維導(dǎo)圖中提及的除外）；

4.詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Frank,

I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation.___________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hope to see you!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Frank,

I’m glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation. Nanchong is a great city with a long history. You can watch North Sichuan Puppetry and know about Chen Shou, a well－known historian. He wrote a book called Records of the Three Kingdoms.

There are many places of interest in Nanchong. You can visit Langzhong Ancient City. The buildings are so amazing. And you can enjoy the fantastic Jialing River and the wonderful Mount Lingyun. If you want to relax yourself, make sure to try Zhangfei Beef, Clear Noodles in Chili Sauce and other delicious food. Besides, you can have fun and buy something special for your family and friends at Wangfujing Mall.

Hope to see you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。首先要先讀懂思維導(dǎo)圖。通過(guò)思維導(dǎo)圖可知我們要介紹南充的美食，名勝，歷史文化。美食包括張飛牛肉，川北涼粉；名勝包括閬州古城，嘉陵江；歷史文化包括川北大木偶，三國(guó)志作者陳壽等。寫作時(shí)不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)還要根據(jù)南充特點(diǎn)做必要的發(fā)揮。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn),能圍繞內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，如：Besides, you can have fun and buy something special for your family and friends at Wangfujing Mall., 而且短文內(nèi)容具體、豐富，如：You can watch North Sichuan Puppetry and know about Chen Shou, a well－known historian.，If you want to relax yourself, make sure to try Zhangfei Beef, Clear Noodles in Chili Sauce and other delicious food.等。短文還應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯, 句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。