Question

假如你是李華，還有不到兩個(gè)月就要告別學(xué)習(xí)了近三年的母校。請(qǐng)以“What Can We Do for Our School?”為題，結(jié)合下面表格內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。

What can we do for our school?
To protect the facilities in our school.	To turn off the light; not waste food, …
To make our campus more beautiful	Keep the campus clean; look after flowers and trees well,…
…	…

要求：1 詞數(shù)：90左右；
2 參考詞匯： 校園campus；設(shè)施facilities
3 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，且不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone!
It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

Hello, everyone!
It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
The first thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class.
The second thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school or organize a cleaning on the campus. And equally importantly, we should develop a good habit of not littering about.
At this moment, I think our duty is to put all our efforts into study not just for our school, but also for our future.
If everyone does his best for our school, I believe our school will soon take on a new look, and become a better place to study and live in.
Thanks for listening!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句 If everyone does his best for our school；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣等。序數(shù)詞first和second等的使用是本文看起來(lái)更加條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。