Question

每一個人都有朋友，朋友似陽光陪伴并溫暖著我們。假如Liu Ming 是你的朋友，請按要求寫一篇不少于100詞的英語文章，內(nèi)容包括：
1、你和Liu Ming 的比照；
2、對于朋友是同還是異更好表達你的看法；
3、和朋友友好相處的建議；（不少于2點）
提示：
1、Liu Ming：15 ，serious；like reading books; be good at schoolwork; dream: to be a doctor.---
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息；
3、表達完整，邏輯順暢

Answer 1

LiuMing is one of my good friends.He is 15 years old and he is very serious.I’m as old as him and I’m outgoing.He likes reading books, but I like playing computer games.He is good at schoolwork.His dream is to be a doctor,but I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I like friends who are different.As we are different.,we have different interests ,we can learn more from each other .As good friends,We should get along well with each other and help each other.We should be honest .And I think if you want to have a good friend ,you should respect your friend and share your interests with each other.Do you think so?

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: likes reading books, 喜歡讀書 is good at schoolwork擅長學(xué)業(yè)I like friends who are different.我喜歡性格相異的朋友。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.