Question

17．國慶假期你去哪里旅游了呢？在享受美景的同時又有何感受呢？請寫一篇旅游日記．
注意要包括以下幾項內容：
1Where did you go？
2Who did you go with？
3How was the weather there？
4What did you do？
5What did you think of your vacation？
注意：1 內容必須包括提示的信息；可適當發(fā)揮．如果國慶沒去旅游，也可寫經(jīng)歷過的旅游．
2 邏輯通順，表達得體．書寫工整．
3 字數(shù)在70左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park我們在一家著名的主題公園玩得很開心．
enjoy oneself玩得開心
【高分句型二】
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there我去三亞的旅行似乎短暫疲勞，但是我們真的在那里玩得開心，
but表示轉折．

解答 Last summer vacation，I went on a trip to Sanya，Hainan．（時間地點）I went there by train with my parents．（人物）It took about 12 hours to get there．The weather is sunny．（天氣）On the first day，we walked around the city．It was quite a beautiful place．The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean．We all enjoyed the beautiful views．People there were friendly too．
On the second day，we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums．Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park．【高分句型一】
We did some shopping on the third day．Mum and I bought a lot of things．After that，we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant．
（經(jīng)過）
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there【高分句型二】．（感覺）

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