Question

4．你在中學(xué)已經(jīng)待了接近四年了．明年你就要畢業(yè)了．四年中發(fā)生了很多值得你記憶的事情．跟同學(xué)相處的喜與樂，與老師相處的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴．他們對你的學(xué)習(xí)有什么樣的幫助，你在這四年收獲了什么？根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Friendship is①the most important and precious thing ②that I get．
①最高級的使用．
②that I get為定語從句，that是關(guān)系詞，先行詞thing．
【高分句型二】
I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．
so…that如此…以致于，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 I get friendship from my class life
My class life is full of happiness．（班級生活如何）During the four years'school life，I've got so many things from my class life．Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)題--最大的收獲） I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends．Once I failed，my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on．When I was ill，my friends helped me and looked after me well．When I succeeded，my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness．（經(jīng)歷）Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life．As the old saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．【高分句型二】In the last three months，I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories．（做些什么）I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me．

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