Question

6．現(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢(mèng)而奮斗．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖示，談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么辦？

Students（study）
Building Beautiful China
Building Beautiful China
要求：1、短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；
3、語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；
4、詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．                                                

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants為了生產(chǎn)足夠的水果和蔬菜，他們忙于種植．
in order to do sth為了做某事，表示目的．
【高分句型二】
I think①we should study hard ②to get rich knowledge ③so as to make contributions to our country我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)獲取豐富的知識(shí)，為我們國家做貢獻(xiàn)．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句，
②動(dòng)詞不定式作為目的狀語．
③so as to do sth為了做某事．表示目的．

解答 Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．
In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．【高分句型一】（農(nóng)民）Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we  do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country【高分句型二】．（學(xué)生）

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