Question

【題目】良好的生活與學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣對(duì)我們的成長(zhǎng)是非常重要的。請(qǐng)從以下的習(xí)慣中選擇一個(gè)你以前做得不夠好，但現(xiàn)在已具備的好習(xí)慣，談一談你養(yǎng)成這個(gè)習(xí)慣的過(guò)程及收益。
要求：1. 不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；2. 內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊；3. 80詞左右；4. 文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】My good habit
My good habit is early to bed and early to rise.
Two years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student, I liked reading books in bed. Every day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until 24:00 o’clock. The next day I couldn’t get up on time. I used to be late for school, and I felt tired in class. It was too bad.
With the help of my teacher and my parents, I have given up the bad habit. Ever since, I go to bed early and get up early. I never go to school late again. As a result, I’m much stronger and doing better in school now.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。