Question

據(jù)報(bào)道，從2011年開始上海、寧波等地個(gè)別學(xué)校進(jìn)行了電子書包試點(diǎn)。這是否預(yù)示電子書將全面推廣？它對(duì)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)會(huì)有什么影響？就此，你班同學(xué)發(fā)起了一次主題為“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的討論，假如你叫陳華，請(qǐng)你給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹一下討論的情況及你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

贊成	反對(duì)
環(huán)保，節(jié)約紙張，不會(huì)過多砍伐樹木	長時(shí)間使用對(duì)眼睛有害
美觀、小巧，便于攜帶，便于查找資料	不能直接在書上做筆記
可以在無光的環(huán)境下閱讀	被一些學(xué)生用來玩游戲

注意：1、開頭部分已寫好，只需接著寫,不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)總數(shù)。
2、可適當(dāng)增加討論話題時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的話語，使所寫內(nèi)容連貫。
3、所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面表格全部信息。
4、短文詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad?___________________________________________________________________________
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Yours truely,
Chen Hua

Answer 1

Some students thought that E-Books are good for environment. They can save plenty of paper. So people needn’t cut down too many trees. E-books are also very nice and small. And they are easy to carry .people can search for information conveniently. They  can be read in the environment without light.
But some students disagreed with them. They thought if they use them for a long time, they are bad for their eyes. While having classes, students can’t make notes directly in the books. Sometimes, they can be played by students .I think E-books will be replaced the traditional books in the future. I am looking forward to the day.

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，給報(bào)社寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要為復(fù)數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。