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20．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)圍繞以下幾個(gè)方面給你的筆友 Tom 寫封信，談?wù)勀愠踔挟厴I(yè)后暑假的打算．（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）1．經(jīng)過繁忙的復(fù)習(xí)、考試后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜歡做的事…
2．多與父母交流，幫助做家務(wù)．
3．參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐（如：幫助老人、殘疾人等），增加對(duì)社會(huì)的了解． 
注意：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：80 詞左右（已給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
DearTom，
How are you getting on the sedays？I've just finished my most important exam．After workinghard for a long time，I really want to have a good rest during the summervacation．First，I'm going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books．Then，it's time tocommunicate with my parents．I wish to share my happiness and sadness withthem．Besides，I plan to help do some housework．At last，I hope to be a volunteer，helping the old and disabled as much aspossible．In this way，I can know about the world better．
By the way，howwill you spend your vacation？

Best wishes!

                                                Yours，
                                                LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是圍繞初中畢業(yè)后暑假的打算給筆友寫一封信．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從三方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．經(jīng)過繁忙的復(fù)習(xí)、考試后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜歡做的事…
2．多與父母交流，幫助做家務(wù)．
3．參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐（如：幫助老人、殘疾人等），增加對(duì)社會(huì)的了解． 
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語：
First…then..besides…at last…首先…然后…另外…最后…
it's time to do sth做某事的時(shí)間到了
share…with sb和某人分享…
plan to do sth計(jì)劃去做某事
as…as possible盡可能…
by the way順便說一聲
參考句子：
After working hard for a long time，I really want to have a good rest during the summer vacation．
句中after+doing實(shí)際是一個(gè)從句，after I worked hard for a long time，主從句的主語一致，故這里省略了從句的主語和謂語．
At last，I hope to be a volunteer，helping the old and disabled as much as possible．（高分句型）
句中helping the old and disabled as much as possible是動(dòng)名詞短語作為伴隨狀語，as much as possible盡可能多的．

解答 Dear Tom，
How are you getting on these days？I've just finished my most important exam．After working hard for a long time，I really want to have a good rest during the summer vacation．（高分句型）（考試后休息）First，I'm going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books．（做自己想做的）Then，it's time to communicate with my parents．I wish to share my happiness and sadness with them．（與父母交流）Besides，I plan to help do some housework．（幫忙做家務(wù)）At last，I hope to be a volunteer，helping the old and disabled as much as possible．（高分句型）In this way，I can know about the world better．（社會(huì)實(shí)踐）
By the way，how will you spend your vacation？
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．