Question

九年級(jí)的學(xué)習(xí)更加緊張和忙碌，我們應(yīng)該怎么做，才能在一年以后實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。因此， 我們應(yīng)當(dāng)

1）擁有充足睡眠，上課才能認(rèn)真

2）多做體育鍛煉，保持健康身體

3）制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，避免越忙越亂

4）你的做法和理由 ……

用英文撰寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的文章，字?jǐn)?shù)80以下150以上將酌情扣分。

要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯： rest enough do sports studying plan or

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Everybody knows ,when you entered the third year of middle school, it means you get a busy life, you are busy for study everyday in order to enter a good high school, I think to relax ourselves while we are studying is also vey important. You should have enough sleep, then you can be careful in class. Doing more exercises and keeping healthy is also very important. You should also make a good plan so that you can study in order.

I have some good ways to relax ,for example, listen to the music ,I love to listen to the pop music, its beautiful melody makes us relaxing ,and then , I also like watching movies , I like English movies ,so I can learn some English words from it .The exciting plot in the movies can release my pressure. In my free time, I like reading interesting books , which are helpful to us .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一篇以有關(guān)九年級(jí)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。