Question

根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文介紹自己的夢(mèng)想家園。
詞數(shù)：70左右
要點(diǎn)：1．我的夢(mèng)想家園在山腳下，很大，有三層樓。
2．屋前有一個(gè)大花園和一個(gè)溫室( green house)，屋后有一個(gè)籃球場(chǎng)。
3．-樓有一個(gè)游泳池，一個(gè)家庭影院，一個(gè)游戲室。
4．二樓是客廳、餐廳和廚房。
5．三樓有我父母的臥室，我哥哥和我弟弟合住一間臥室，我有我自己的臥室。
My dream home
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. ____________________________________
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I hope my dream will come true.

Answer 1

One possible version：
My Dream Home
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It is very big. There are three floors. There is a big garden and a green house in front of the house. Behind the house there is a basketball court. On the ground floor there is a swimming pool, a home cinema and a game room. On the first floor, there is a sitting room, a dining room and a kitchen. On the second floor, there is a bedroom for my parents. My elder brother and my younger brother share a bedroom. I have my own room. I hope my dream will come true.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我夢(mèng)想的家。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is .....There are......及I hope ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)希望自己夢(mèng)想成真。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我夢(mèng)想的家的位置，接下來(lái)介紹夢(mèng)想的家的設(shè)施和結(jié)構(gòu)，最后希望自己的夢(mèng)想能實(shí)現(xiàn)。此處用了 in front of ， On the ground floor， my own room等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。