Question

針對(duì)私家車(chē)日益增加的現(xiàn)狀，學(xué)校就發(fā)展私家車(chē)的利弊進(jìn)行調(diào)查，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文，闡述其利弊；可適當(dāng)拓展并談?wù)勀愕目捶ɑ蚪ㄗh。
有利因素：出行方便；促進(jìn)社會(huì)發(fā)展
不利因素：造成交通擁堵，引發(fā)更多事故，加重環(huán)境污染
要求：
1.內(nèi)容包含所有的提示信息；2.意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；3.詞數(shù)要求：80---100詞。提示詞：
1．do a survey  2. private car;  3.convient;  4. cause pollution  5. traffic accident
6. advice      7. had better   8.walk      9.ride a bike    10. instead of
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Yesterday, our school made a survey about private cars. Some students think it’s easy for people to go by car. But most students don’t agree. Neither do I. Cars can cause more serious pollution. The more people travel by cars ,the worse our world will be. What’s more, the traffic will be heavier. As a result, there will be more traffic accidents.
In my view, we should walk or go by bike instead of by car. We can also take a bus when we travel for a short distance. We should do what we can to protect our environment. Let’s begin now.

試題分析：此題是提示性作文，要求根據(jù)提示及所給材料寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，主要考查寫(xiě)作能力，也是對(duì)英語(yǔ)綜合知識(shí)運(yùn)用的考查，這就要求仔細(xì)分析所給提示，不要漏掉提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫的文章。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言連貫，層次分明，簡(jiǎn)潔明了。尤其是用了一些重要句型結(jié)構(gòu)，為文章增色不少。如：Some students think it’s easy for people to go by car.（有些學(xué)生認(rèn)為對(duì)人們來(lái)講乘車(chē)出行更容易）；The more people travel by cars, the worse our world will be.（人們乘車(chē)出行越多，我們的世界就會(huì)越糟糕）等。