Question

請仔細閱讀以下關于初三學生睡眠時間調(diào)查結果的數(shù)據(jù)圖表，以圖表為依據(jù)簡單分析初三學生的日常作息情況，談談你的感想，并就如何安排好復習迎考提些建議， 寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。（標點符號不占格）
Write a passage based on the given graphic with at least 60 words
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

One possible version：
Most students need about 8 to more than 9 hours of sleep every night. Unfortunately, many students don't get enough sleep. recent studies show that 30 percent of the students sleep 6 hours every night ; 55 percent of the students sleep 6 to 7 hours every night ; 12 percent of the students sleep 8 hours every night and only 4 percent of the students sleep more than 10 hours every night.
Your entrance examination at once, and I expect you to be very busy preparing for it and a little nervous. But I believe that you will do well.I am going to give you a few practical hints. It is no good to go on studying until the last minute of examination. What you need in the exam is a clear mind. If you tire yourself out before the examination, you will not be mentally and physically ready for it. So a day or two before the examination just relax-leave your books shut and try some other things: get out into the open air;do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun.
　　　I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以在寫作時，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時的表達方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: preparing for ；at once；I am going to give you a few practical hints. do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun;I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success.學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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