Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“A Bad Weekend”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀阒苣┧��?jīng)歷的事情。可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
1. 和同學(xué)們約好上周六去五峰山玩。
2. 約定在早上8:00在火車站見面，乘火車去那兒。
3. 由于前一晚我睡得太晚，第二天醒來時(shí)已經(jīng)7點(diǎn)半。
4. 沒有吃早飯匆忙趕到車站，同學(xué)們已經(jīng)乘車走了。
5. 難受極了，過了個(gè)很糟糕的周末。
A Bad Weekend
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Answer 1

A Bad Weekend
I made an appointment with my classmates to go to visit Wufeng Mountain last Saturday. We decided to meet at the train station at 8:00am, and then take a train to go there. Since I went to bed very late the night before, it had been already 7:30 when I woke up the next morning. I didn’t have breakfast and went to the station in a rush. But by the time I got to the train station, my classmates had left by train. How sad I was! What a bad weekend!

首先，審好題，題目是“A Bad Weekend”要寫出周末經(jīng)歷的事情，突出“bad”，認(rèn)真找出題目所給寫作提綱的1—5條中所列的核心詞。將其翻譯出來。如：去五峰山玩go to visit Wufeng Mountain，上周六last Saturday，約定made an appointment，最后再來組句，排列詞組，形成句子。I made an appointment with my classmates to go to visit Wufeng Mountain last Saturday。在第二條中，找到乘火車take a train，去那兒go there，連起來就變成take a train to go there。在火車站at the train station，在早上8:00 at 8:00am或者at 8:00 in the morning,這個(gè)句子有2部分，最后連一下變?yōu)閃e decided to meet at the train station at 8:00am, and then take a train to go there.第三句也一樣，首先要找到前一晚the night before，睡得太晚went to bed very late，第二天the next morning，已經(jīng)already，醒來woke up，由已經(jīng)一詞判斷要用完成時(shí)，并且整篇時(shí)態(tài)都是過去的，所以用過去完成時(shí)。與完成時(shí)連用，用since來表示“由于”更好。第四第五一樣，要找到短語(yǔ)，可表達(dá)為上面的句子，也可這樣來寫：My classmates had left by train when I hurried to train station whithout breakfast.What a bad weekend I spent !