Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文，所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用，請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名。

生活中每個(gè)人都有過(guò)與他人分享的體驗(yàn)，如分享一本有趣的書(shū)、一段難忘的經(jīng)歷、一個(gè)閃光的想法……

現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙就分享（Sharing）話(huà)題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。描述一次你與他人分享的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>

提示詞語(yǔ)：share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version

I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

【解析】

試題分析：這題材料作文，就是考生根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容的提示提煉寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容和要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要用簡(jiǎn)單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確。注意應(yīng)用所給短語(yǔ)和單詞。

考點(diǎn)：材料作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：材料作文要提煉寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容和要點(diǎn)，要注意使用經(jīng)典的英語(yǔ)句型結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)表達(dá)自己的思想，避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。