Question

書面表達(dá)(15分)

請以“My happy ”為題寫一篇關(guān)于描述人、物或事件的英語短文。

要求：1. 先把題目補(bǔ)充完整 (空格處可以是單詞、短語，也可以是從句)；

2．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名或人名等信息；

3．詞數(shù)80左右。

My happy _________

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My happy day

Last Sunday evening, I went to City Cinema to see a film named Let The Bullets Fly[讓子彈飛] after I finished all my homework. When I got there, the film would begin. Suddenly, I found a little girl crying on the corner outside the cinema. I went there and asked him why he was crying. He didn’t tell me until a few minutes. He got lost and couldn’t find his mother when the last film was over. I helped find his mother at once. An hour had passed, but I couldn’t find the boy’s mother. I had to call the police. When we got to the police station, the boy’s mother was waiting there. How happy they were! When I got to the cinema, the film had already been over. Though I couldn’t see the film, I still felt happy because I helped a lost boy.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以My happy_____為題寫一篇作文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，關(guān)于人、事件的，和某人相處某事的的快樂時光；提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者講述了自己的時間都花費(fèi)在哪了，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如I helped find his mother at once.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Suddenly, I found a little girl crying on the corner outside the cinema. I went there and asked him why he was crying. How happy they were! 等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。