Question

書面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

大千世界，無奇不有。相信同學(xué)們也遇到過這類謊言、騙局或謠言。假設(shè)你叫李明，是紅星（Hongxing）中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：

自我介紹；

描述一次類似的經(jīng)歷，并說說你當(dāng)時(shí)的感受；

以后再經(jīng)歷這樣的事，作為學(xué)生，我們?cè)撛趺醋觯空?qǐng)?zhí)岢鰞蓚�(gè)建議或做法。

作文要求：

不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；

語句連貫，次數(shù)在80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.

 

 

 

 

 

That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

面對(duì)謊言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for him. Later I found him playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He didn’t tell the lie. I would do the duty for him if he asked.

As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.

That’s all. Thank you. (95 words)

面對(duì)騙局

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.

As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.

That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)

面對(duì)謠言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.

As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.

That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文,寫一篇發(fā)言稿介紹自己的一次經(jīng)歷,并針對(duì)自己的經(jīng)歷提出兩點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合本文題材可知,寫作中首先要對(duì)自己的情況簡(jiǎn)要介紹,并注意用語的禮貌性,如開頭對(duì)聽眾進(jìn)行問候,結(jié)尾表達(dá)謝意等.結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文時(shí)態(tài)涉及過去,現(xiàn)在和將來三種時(shí)態(tài),注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語的一致問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞,注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文論據(jù)充分。使用了不少復(fù)合句為文章增色很多。如1.As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該總是說真話即使別人可能不同意我們.2. If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help. 如果我們不知道如何應(yīng)對(duì)，我們最好向老師或父母請(qǐng)求幫助。3.we should keep calm when we face such rumors. 我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜，當(dāng)我們面對(duì)這樣的謠言。等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。