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8．南京中考在即．假如你是班長，要求與學生談談考前幾天的注意事項．以下五點必須全部包括在內，也可適當拓展．注意：文中不得出現真實的校名及姓名，篇幅80-100詞．短文的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數．
1．合理飲食與睡眠．
2．消除焦慮，充滿信心．
3．適度復習并做適當活動．
4．熟悉考場環(huán)境，如廁所、考場的位置等．
5．提出希望與祝福．
參考詞匯：考場環(huán)境：examination environment； 
Nanjing Senior high school entrance examination is coming．Everybody wants to do better in it．So get following things ready．First，It's very important for us to pay attention to our diet．Second，we should go to bed on time．You'd better not get too tired while revising your lessons．Third，don't be too nervous．It's necessary to take some exercise as you like．Also remember to get familiar with the examination environment，such as the toilet，the test room and so on．And above all，be confident of yourself．
If you get ready the things that I mention above，your dream will come true．Good luck，everybody!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是談談中考前幾天的注意事項．時態(tài)主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第二、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．合理飲食與睡眠．
2．消除焦慮，充滿信心．
3．適度復習并做適當活動．
4．熟悉考場環(huán)境，如廁所、考場的位置等．
5．提出希望與祝福．
常用到的重點短語：
pay attention to 關注
on time 準時
had better do sth 最好做某事
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
such as 例如
above all 最重要的
【高分句型】
1．First，①It's very important for us to②pay attention to our diet．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②pay attention to 關注
2．①If you get ready the things ②that I mention above，your dream will come true．
①if引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現的規(guī)則．
②that I mention above定語從句，that是關系詞作為從句的賓語，先行詞是things．

解答 Sample writing：
Nanjing Senior high school entrance examination is coming．Everybody wants to do better in it．So get following things ready．First，It's very important for us to pay attention to our diet（合理飲食）．【高分句型】Second，we should go to bed on time．You'd better not get too tired while revising your lessons（合理睡眠，適當復習）．Third，don't be too nervous．（消除焦慮）It's necessary to take some exercise as you like．（做適當活動）Also remember to get familiar with the examination environment，such as the toilet，the test room and so on．（熟悉考場環(huán)境）And above all，be confident of yourself．（充滿信心）
If you get ready the things that I mention above，your dream will come true．【高分句型】Good luck，everybody!（提出希望與祝福）

點評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，并且要有適當的發(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結合活動內容，寫出自己的觀點．