Question

“保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以How to Be a Greener Person 為題，寫一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的短文，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表你的看法。

問(wèn)題	1.亂伐樹(shù)林；土地沙化； 2.亂扔垃圾；河水變臟； 3.不加處理排放廢物；空氣質(zhì)量差；
建議	請(qǐng)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

                                                            

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and throw rubbish away here and there. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. As a result, a lot of rich land has changed into desert, leaving only sand. Many rivers and lakes are dead now. The air is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Many people now are in bad health.

I think it’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，給出的材料比較簡(jiǎn)單，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前，可先列出簡(jiǎn)要提綱；寫出關(guān)鍵單詞；確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題，然后再動(dòng)手寫作。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

考點(diǎn)：關(guān)于環(huán)保的議論文，考查學(xué)生基本的語(yǔ)言組織能力。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：給材料作文首先要如是反映材料內(nèi)容，不遺漏要點(diǎn)。再就是注意條理清楚, 語(yǔ)句通順, 語(yǔ)法正確, 書(shū)寫規(guī)范，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到要求。