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3．新海浪樂隊是一支受歡迎的樂隊．以下是有關(guān)這支樂隊的一些信息，請根據(jù)所給的信息寫一篇報道，不少于80詞．

Name of Band：New Ocean Waves	It was founded in October of 2004
The things they have done： 1．had three major concerts =2．made a hit CD 3．won the best new group of the year	The things they are going to do： 1．to appear on CCTV 2．to go on a world tour next month 3．to have a number one hit some day

Do you know the New Ocean Waves？It's one of the best bands．It was founded in October，2004．
In the past years the band has made great progress．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．Best of all，it won the Best New Group of the year．
They have new plans this year．They are going to appear on CCTV．They plan to go on a world tour next month，so don't miss them if you have a chance to go to their concerts．They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．The band is on its way．
Let's say good luck to them and wish them success．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹一下新海浪樂隊．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．簡介；新海浪樂隊，建立于2004.10
2．事跡；開了三場演唱會，一張流行的CD，獲得最佳新樂隊
3．計劃打算；上CCTV，下個月環(huán)球旅行，有一天成為最流行的樂隊
常用到的重點短語：
make progress 取得進步
not only…but also 不僅…而且…
be going to 打算
good luck 好運
【高分句型】
1．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．
not only…but also 不僅…而且…連接兩個對等的成分．
2．They plan to go on a world tour next month，①so don't miss them ②if you have a chance to go to their concerts．
①so連詞，表示所以，不能與because連用．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
3．They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．
believe后是that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．

解答 Do you know the New Ocean Waves？It's one of the best bands．It was founded in October，2004．（簡介）
In the past years the band has made great progress．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．【高分句型】Best of all，it won the Best New Group of the year．（事跡）
They have new plans this year．They are going to appear on CCTV．They plan to go on a world tour next month，so don't miss them if you have a chance to go to their concerts．【高分句型】They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．【高分句型】The band is on its way．（計劃打算）
Let's say good luck to them and wish them success．（祝愿）

點評 這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達法．